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Monday, January 3, 2011

the heroes (rags to riches or maybe vise versa)

These two kids John .K. Grosset codename:FALCON and Daniel Macaphee codename NANO TECH definitely lived heres the story: Well , wheres to start Falcon is a rich, unmodest, spoiled, ambitous 12 year old. His best friend Daniel Macaphee is a stubborn, poor,and ambitous 11 year old and their story starts with the cia. Falcon was the c.i.a's best young operative member, period He was always equiped with a revolver and long black robe. He had black hair, blue eyes hidden behind his black glasses, and a hell of a lot of skill. Nano tech on the other hand ,equipped with his hand, but its metal and has wires and spikes that can trick out any vehicle known to man or to any other species.He also has the power to shoot out the spikes. he weres a black hoddie that hides his black hair died red and has some major agility.(F.Y.I the c.i.a HATES him.)
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On a top secret government project FALCON needs to go check out a laboratory across the state and get these metal nanites , nanites are little microscopic nano bites that hold bio chemicals. FALCON, being a good friend invites daniel along with him . when they get to the building , with little trouble they get what they came for but Daniel hurts himself and to heal his wound the nanites crawl up his arm and make a permanent metal shell ,
and then the nanites get into his pores. There you have it Daniel is now NANOTECH. from then on to the age of 40 they fought together, with NANOTECH's power and skill, and FALCON's super super awesome skill, they were unbeatable. Well unbeatable perhaps until HE showed up ,the evil Kondax,or the evil emperor. Kondax took over the continent. NANOTECH and FALCON pursued Kondax , on top of the secret lair of Kondax FALCON grabbed him and jumped. NANOTECH tried to save FALCON but Kondax'es drones pulled him back. Kondax and FALCON now lie dead on the street. NANOTECH then found FALCONS son in a building that Kondax used to run his nefarious plots .Richard was the sons name and he was inside the building being tortured .NANOTECH saved Richard . the two them didn't trust each other for a while but after that while, they did. Finally NANOTECH had a son, Michael and then Richard and Mike became the new generation . Years later NANOTECH was in his auto-shop while Richard and Mike were fighting bad guys. These other guys walked down the street towards the auto shop, the guys were going after NANOTECH Rich and Mike tried to stop the men, the men knocked the two boys out unconscious. When they came to, 2 hours later they rushed to the shop , there they saw NANOTECH on the ground, he had been beaten to death. Mike swore that he would get revenge, Rich held him back, and they went to get a doughnut.

1 comment:

jsposeep said...

The left him dead and left for doughnuts? Unbelievable!!